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All Deviations
All Deviations


You may have my attention if you wish to feel loved.
You may have my eyes if you wish to see.
You may have my lips if you wish to kiss
You may have my ears if you wish to listen.
You may have my neck if you wish to change.
You may have my shoulders if you wish to carry through.
You may have my arms if you wish to hold.
You may have my hands if you wish to grip.
You may have my fingers if you wish to feel.
You may have my torso if you wish to stay warm.
You may have my legs if you wish to move.
You may have my feet if you wish to dance.

You may have my heart. I have had no use for it.
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~Non-Numerus:iconNon-Numerus: Apr 17, 2008, 6:03:11 PM
This is a nice poem. Never ever take it figuratively. Although I would give my heart to my GF if she needed it...

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"It is easier to be critical than correct."
-Benjamin Disraeli
~Johnhamsta:iconJohnhamsta: Apr 17, 2008, 6:11:27 PM
Hehehe. Good advice.

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Resist all you want, it only increases the current.
~wh0rem0ans:iconwh0rem0ans: Apr 18, 2008, 10:17:38 AM
This is well built. I just wonder ... why would someone who has had no use for their heart have the compassion to offer everything to another?

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The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ,
Moves on: not all thy Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half Line.
Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it.

Omar Khayyam
~Johnhamsta:iconJohnhamsta: Apr 20, 2008, 7:16:12 PM
The poem progresses until there is little to give. And then all is given.

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Resist all you want, it only increases the current.