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All Deviations
All Deviations


Smile, smile, and it won't seem so bad.
Smile, smile, when you know you've been had.
Smile, smile, now your grin is a fad.
Smile, smile, and go on being sad.

Smile, smile, it will all be okay.
Smile, smile, put it off for today.
Smile, smile, on your bed you will lay.
Smile, smile, and succeed you just may.

You can hear my cheeks ripping, because of the smile.
You can taste my lips slipping, because of denial.
You can feel my paper clipping, my pretend isle.
You can see my nightmares dripping, filling the vial.

It's so untrue, and it's so fake, I beseech the world my smile to take.
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Emo poetry! Oh noes!
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~Non-Numerus:iconNon-Numerus: Apr 15, 2008, 4:26:31 PM
I like it. People need to smile more. I was walking through the supermarket and some random places, and people rarely smile...

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"It is easier to be critical than correct."
-Benjamin Disraeli
~Johnhamsta:iconJohnhamsta: Apr 16, 2008, 1:49:05 AM
Ah...I don't think you grasp the point of this poem. But that's alright, too.

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Resist all you want, it only increases the current.
~Non-Numerus:iconNon-Numerus: Apr 16, 2008, 3:25:47 PM
No, that was just me rambling on. The smile seems to be sort of a sentiment huh...

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"It is easier to be critical than correct."
-Benjamin Disraeli
~Lonely-Rose:iconLonely-Rose: Apr 17, 2008, 4:28:00 PM
DAMN! that was really good! i liked it alot!

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In the absence of Light, Darkness prevails.

You can't spell Slaughter without Laughter.
~Johnhamsta:iconJohnhamsta: Apr 17, 2008, 4:58:55 PM
Is that because it holds true for you as well? ^_^'

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Resist all you want, it only increases the current.
~Lonely-Rose:iconLonely-Rose: Apr 17, 2008, 5:56:37 PM
idk....i just really liked it. it was good!

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In the absence of Light, Darkness prevails.

You can't spell Slaughter without Laughter.
~Johnhamsta:iconJohnhamsta: Apr 17, 2008, 6:10:31 PM
hehe. Alright! ^_^

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Resist all you want, it only increases the current.
~Lonely-Rose:iconLonely-Rose: Apr 18, 2008, 4:07:58 PM
dork. ow. my leg hurts! whaa! ~tear~

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In the absence of Light, Darkness prevails.

You can't spell Slaughter without Laughter.
~Johnhamsta:iconJohnhamsta: Apr 20, 2008, 7:18:14 PM
I is sowwy. -yells at leg- STOP HURTING!!! XD

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Resist all you want, it only increases the current.